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Jet Plane

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Air is Air
Not air but air
its nothing but air
i need more than air
i need a more than air more than sun
more than any creature could possibly have
Do you need air?
No you dont but
but i do and you
dont and i do
getting air is
like a flying
jet about to
lift off  without
me. Don't you
need to pay
for air too?
I bet you do if i have to because every air has a price
every air needs a price.
And i think you know
Air...
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Wallet's avatar
It starts out with an even, blissful flow but then it begins to lean into bitterness regarding someone. You use language that demands attention; very blunt and authoritative. If this is indeed bitterness, it was done well because guilt would overcome them if they knew they were the source. "getting air is
like a flying
jet about to
lift off without
me." Particularly beautiful. I also enjoy the structure, as though it's still flowing in spite of the direct meaning. Love this.